The sky miss white clouds, just as I miss home, but I always can not meet with my hometown. I met the clear lake home in a dream, like the bright eyes, looked at me and tell the mind. I met home in my dream of wild grapes, really sweet! To reconcile the anguish in my heart. I came home in the dream garden, fruit fragrance, really good! Small fish miss the river, just as I miss home, I miss all the home! I miss my grandmother, miss me back when she gave me a sweet hug, I miss the praise of my grandmother, I miss home!
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The sky misses white clouds, just as I miss home, but I always can not meet my hometown.
I dreamt of the clear lake in my hometown. It was just like the bright eye, looking at me and telling me something. I dreamt of wild grapes in my hometown, They were really sweet! To relieve the pain in my heart, I could only come home in my dream.
I miss home! I miss my grandmother, miss her sweet hug!
六年级:潘文静
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