2016-05-05 来源：作文网原创
Dear Miss. Tam,
May Day is coming. I ‘m going to Beijing. I ‘m going by plane. Because Beijing is far. I ‘m going to visit a museum, see the Great Wall and take some photos. I ‘m going to eat lots of food, too. I think I will have a great time.
Write soon,
Best regards,
Linn
修改后：
Dear Miss Tam,
May Day is coming. I'm going to Beijing. I'm going there by plane, because it is too far. I'm going to visit a museum, see the Great Wall and take some photos. I'm going to eat lots of delicious food, too. I think I will have a great time.
Best regards,
Linn
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