There is a person she silently pay no return,than person is the mother。the life of me、raising me、bring me up 、give me a home ,Let me be free from care。 But l always do not understand ,think this is as unalterable principles, but l was wrong。I want to say to her:l love you,Can say not to export。 When l need help,I always think of her first,and she will do her best to help me。When l am happy ,she will be more happy than me ,when l am sad,she will accompany me。 I sincerely say to you ,thank you 。
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My mother is a person who silently pays no return to take care of me. She gave me life and a home. She tries her best to raise me up and always put me at the first place. But sometimes I can't understand her. I think I can do lots of things by myself. Even I said something not good to her. I deeply regret. I want to tell her that I love her. When I need help, she will be there and do her best to help me. When I am happy, she will be happier than me. When I am sad, she will accompany me. I want to say, "Mum, thank you and I love you!"
批改老师:Crystal老师
初二:左兴汶
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