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中考英语作文范文及点评:自由作文2

2009-04-13

  【习作要求】

  Write about what you are going to do after you leave school.

  【参考范文】

  When I finish school, I want to be a teacher. Though teachers are poorly paid and they have no power, teachers are kind, respectable and learned, like angels. They lead the pathway to succeed. It's quite sure that teachers are very important in modern world. We can't develop our country without knowledge. Teachers teach us knowledge. I like all of my teachers in my school. I would like to be an English teacher. It's very important for the students to learn English well today. I'll try my best to be an ideal teacher. My students can make our country better in the future.

  【名师点评】

  这是一篇阐述观点的议论文,作者用简洁而流畅的语言表达了长大后想成为一名老师的愿望。论据充分,观点明确,并且字里行间渗透了对祖国的无比热爱之情和把祖国建设更加美好的决心。

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